kia ora Madisyn, I like the way that you spread your work out so we could understand it. Maybe next time you could revise and edit your work. Sometimes in class we do something like this to plan our writing so we know what we are writing about.
Talofa! I love the way you have created this explanation planning. It is well presented and I love the colours you've used and hopefully you get to do another plan on a different writing example. Thank you, Launoa
Ki ora Madisyn,
ReplyDeleteI am quite impressed how you showed us an explanation plan that begins with a introduction and end with a conclusion, well - ka pai.
kia ora Madisyn,
ReplyDeleteI like the way that you spread your work out so we could understand it. Maybe next time you could revise and edit your work. Sometimes in class we do something like this to plan our writing so we know what we are writing about.
Talofa!
ReplyDeleteI love the way you have created this explanation planning. It is well presented and I love the colours you've used and hopefully you get to do another plan on a different writing example.
Thank you, Launoa