Welcome to my blog. I'm a student at Grey Main School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Hi Madisyn, I'm Pyper from St Patrick school in Greymouth. I quite like your story. Maybe next time you could make more scene when your saying "My Nana my cousins" I think you may need to put an and in between Nana and my.
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Hi Madisyn, I'm Pyper from St Patrick school in Greymouth. I quite like your story. Maybe next time you could make more scene when your saying "My Nana my cousins" I think you may need to put an and in between Nana and my.
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